tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post4672771659000681939..comments2024-01-07T21:31:32.449+01:00Comments on Better Lies: Crush kymmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-60811232398911703002012-12-07T18:40:39.073+01:002012-12-07T18:40:39.073+01:00Thank you, Claire. I believe we were on similar wa...Thank you, Claire. I believe we were on similar wavelengths.kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-33892194300082834682012-12-07T18:00:33.683+01:002012-12-07T18:00:33.683+01:00This feeling really resonated with me. Elegant use...This feeling really resonated with me. Elegant use of the challenge elements!Silversound7http://www.writelovelive.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-90177876834042706462012-12-07T13:34:38.900+01:002012-12-07T13:34:38.900+01:00Thanks, Draug!Thanks, Draug!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-79102448991792073832012-12-07T05:15:43.271+01:002012-12-07T05:15:43.271+01:00It does seem other-worldly. Great piece (:It does seem other-worldly. Great piece (:Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-43343024662460599572012-12-07T01:41:20.630+01:002012-12-07T01:41:20.630+01:00Why scary, Janna? Blanks, yeah. Fortunately, you e...Why scary, Janna? Blanks, yeah. Fortunately, you eventually get used to them.kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-26630956594508360972012-12-07T01:40:07.467+01:002012-12-07T01:40:07.467+01:00Thank you. Subtle is the way I like to go.Thank you. Subtle is the way I like to go.kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-34062378934004977392012-12-07T01:39:03.946+01:002012-12-07T01:39:03.946+01:00Thanks, Brian. Why not? Walk into a supermarket, p...Thanks, Brian. Why not? Walk into a supermarket, pick a random face from the past. (Who the fuck is that? Where do I know her from? Or, on a deeper level, what did I ever have in common with that person?)kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-83347725808791110122012-12-07T01:36:47.368+01:002012-12-07T01:36:47.368+01:00Background is displacement, basically. Too many mo...Background is displacement, basically. Too many moves. As Jim Morrison said, Faces come out of the rain When you're strange.kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-73538461065358723652012-12-07T01:35:03.301+01:002012-12-07T01:35:03.301+01:00Thanks, rashmenon. The whys always end up winning ...Thanks, rashmenon. The whys always end up winning anyway!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-64236025071251321872012-12-07T01:34:24.837+01:002012-12-07T01:34:24.837+01:00No, it was a small exercise on living in too many ...No, it was a small exercise on living in too many places, confusing too many faces.kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-50361286244050022652012-12-07T01:32:35.497+01:002012-12-07T01:32:35.497+01:00Life. Nothing. Readjustment.Life. Nothing. Readjustment.kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-86972711079760965472012-12-07T00:31:49.349+01:002012-12-07T00:31:49.349+01:00This was an interesting (but scary scene). There ...This was an interesting (but scary scene). There are so many blanks left to fill in, it could go anywhere, really.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-31656202659374187812012-12-07T00:07:23.060+01:002012-12-07T00:07:23.060+01:00I liked the 'zoom in' on the vertiginous e...I liked the 'zoom in' on the vertiginous effect such a mistake can have - a simple misunderstanding, but looked at closely it has a subtle yet utter impact.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-57740512503759471002012-12-06T22:55:24.068+01:002012-12-06T22:55:24.068+01:00The most interesting part to me is why she imagine...The most interesting part to me is why she imagined seeing that specific friend - what is the story between them? I liked the way you drew us into her uncertainty.Brianhttp://www.pinionpost.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-17654350589128685282012-12-06T21:12:04.114+01:002012-12-06T21:12:04.114+01:00Interesting piece; it's so dreamlike that the ...Interesting piece; it's so dreamlike that the encounter is as disorienting for the reader as the character. I'm curious as to what the background is here. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-71433227678054554972012-12-06T02:20:21.324+01:002012-12-06T02:20:21.324+01:00liked it- the story is open-ended and is dream-lik...liked it- the story is open-ended and is dream-like. you have soo many whys seeking answers at the end. good work :)rashmenonhttp://rashscribbles.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-32184086414127034052012-12-06T02:11:44.738+01:002012-12-06T02:11:44.738+01:00I was a little confused--did she actually see her ...I was a little confused--did she actually see her friend or did she just imagine it? Because it changes the direction of the story, depending. I like that!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-4967392885741478552012-12-05T15:42:16.234+01:002012-12-05T15:42:16.234+01:00What happens next ???What happens next ???Whispering Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00545008138362955040noreply@blogger.com