tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post660948493685200192..comments2024-01-07T21:31:32.449+01:00Comments on Better Lies: Deliverancekymmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comBlogger40125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-53096968324620926492013-11-24T18:42:08.659+01:002013-11-24T18:42:08.659+01:00Really nice to hear it rings true. Thanks for the ...Really nice to hear it rings true. Thanks for the love, Ted! (And so good to see you back here!)kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-6502703337875314092013-11-24T18:41:04.394+01:002013-11-24T18:41:04.394+01:00You´re my kinda gal if you enjoy the bitching in m...You´re my kinda gal if you enjoy the bitching in my dialogues! Haha<br />Thank you so much for your kind words, Kathy!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-10394419604634663662013-11-24T00:36:37.818+01:002013-11-24T00:36:37.818+01:00This is nice... very real. dragged like an aftert...This is nice... very real. <i>dragged like an afterthought</i>... I love that one, Kymm.tedstrutzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09853272125990540823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-25986341787707515902013-11-22T19:50:01.477+01:002013-11-22T19:50:01.477+01:00I thoroughly enjoyed the bitching that went along ...I thoroughly enjoyed the bitching that went along in this dialogue. If that is realism I don't know what is!! You brilliantly executed this and it rocked!! ♥Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11564863484894692249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-4245461995342780612013-11-22T12:48:58.851+01:002013-11-22T12:48:58.851+01:00Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks, Shannon!Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks, Shannon!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-81793200136865572512013-11-22T12:22:05.872+01:002013-11-22T12:22:05.872+01:00An enjoyable read, interesting dialogue!An enjoyable read, interesting dialogue!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-62416434616129462942013-11-21T23:54:45.610+01:002013-11-21T23:54:45.610+01:00Hahaha I had to look up McGuffin. I suck at plots....Hahaha I had to look up McGuffin. I suck at plots.<br />Thank you so much, kind sir!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-21213908723967268112013-11-21T20:08:10.887+01:002013-11-21T20:08:10.887+01:00the wheelchair is like a McGuffin to the real stor...the wheelchair is like a McGuffin to the real story - their complicated relationship<br /><br />this was very good writingLancehttp://lancemyblogcanbeatupyourblog.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-33003761497066442722013-11-21T18:01:46.369+01:002013-11-21T18:01:46.369+01:00Wow, I thought I was really going out on a limb wi...Wow, I thought I was really going out on a limb with that last line - great to hear it worked.<br />Thanks for that, and for the love, momo!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-67913901235867714982013-11-21T18:00:41.837+01:002013-11-21T18:00:41.837+01:00Another vote for the comedy - thanks, Turok! I app...Another vote for the comedy - thanks, Turok! I appreciate the feedback : )kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-9992073292513033932013-11-21T17:59:45.506+01:002013-11-21T17:59:45.506+01:00From NaNo, yeah. This year the prompts are actuall...From NaNo, yeah. This year the prompts are actually helping me move the story along - so thanks for that, too!<br />You are very kind, Tri, and I thank you.kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-91873028471206254112013-11-21T17:58:37.205+01:002013-11-21T17:58:37.205+01:00I think humor would go a long way to alleviating m...I think humor would go a long way to alleviating most of the world's ills, but I often get sidetracked.<br />Thanks for your wonderful support, Gina (yes, I'll continue slogging away NaNoWriMo)! I'm glad it works alone, and thanks for saying so, too.kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-44274671409074636082013-11-21T08:34:02.169+01:002013-11-21T08:34:02.169+01:00I love the whole thing, but for some reason the la...I love the whole thing, but for some reason the last line really made it for me. Something about taking it from appearing to be a jousting range, to referring to them definitively as 'the jousted' was downright perfect. <br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-19455397761614907812013-11-21T03:09:11.516+01:002013-11-21T03:09:11.516+01:00You have control of this, so while I'm not com...You have control of this, so while I'm not complete on what is happening and why, I couldn't help but read it. Each character has their own voice. Whatever is happening between the two of them is interesting, and further a piece of black comedy.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09081536235571059456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-32444427364986207942013-11-21T01:35:46.720+01:002013-11-21T01:35:46.720+01:00This is from your NaNo? I'd love to read the ...This is from your NaNo? I'd love to read the whole thing. You've got such a way with words, Kymm. Thanks for sharing that with us.Trifectahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16492626287830278024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-56365133818479026932013-11-21T00:48:26.892+01:002013-11-21T00:48:26.892+01:00Patient/caregiver relationship dynamic are so diff...Patient/caregiver relationship dynamic are so difficult and tricky. Your words shows us that completely. Although I can relate first, second and third hand. Great standalone piece from something bigger (keep going on NaNoWriMo!). I also imagine there is some humor in their relationship as well. There often is during difficult times!Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04841767868797265391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-53861182509429252662013-11-21T00:46:02.368+01:002013-11-21T00:46:02.368+01:00Happy to hear the dialogue is tight. Thank you so ...Happy to hear the dialogue is tight. Thank you so much for the love, TIZ!!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-60382026970541704552013-11-21T00:34:46.234+01:002013-11-21T00:34:46.234+01:00I'm glad you read all that into these two, but...I'm glad you read all that into these two, but sorry you recognized them so intimately!<br />Thank you so much lum! (And excellent to see you!)kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-36229124226012860692013-11-20T23:18:16.335+01:002013-11-20T23:18:16.335+01:00Love the relationship angle, the tight dialogue an...Love the relationship angle, the tight dialogue and overall feel of this piece. Great job, my friend!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-2866891143504984282013-11-20T17:56:25.217+01:002013-11-20T17:56:25.217+01:00This is a very interesting portrayal of a relation...This is a very interesting portrayal of a relationship frought with guilt, loyalty and anger. I've seen this played out in real life (my own, I'm afraid) and you carry it off very well. lumdog2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/04898266027462039531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-62293038669909288902013-11-20T11:05:36.119+01:002013-11-20T11:05:36.119+01:00Giving up independence is always tough - especiall...Giving up independence is always tough - especially when you have to give it up in more ways than one.<br />Thank you so much for your encouraging comments, Glynis!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-30638003833213780382013-11-20T11:02:02.575+01:002013-11-20T11:02:02.575+01:00I am especially not good at things medical or thin...I am especially not good at things medical or things mechanical. Put them together and you get jousting.<br />This is a tiny scene from secondary characters in the NaNo, so they probably will end up somewhere more extensive. They do seem to be calling for more attention from me : )<br />Thanks for the love, Steph!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-29906646917270980942013-11-20T10:59:02.307+01:002013-11-20T10:59:02.307+01:00Quite a pair - they play a minor part in the NaNo ...Quite a pair - they play a minor part in the NaNo this year, but they do seem to be calling to me. Glad to hear they captured your attention that way.<br />Thanks, as always, for being such a wonderful cheerleader, Valerie!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-88014576244314205182013-11-20T10:56:40.037+01:002013-11-20T10:56:40.037+01:00Ha! I love that you relate to the envelope-folder ...Ha! I love that you relate to the envelope-folder conundrum. Glad you liked it, Janna. Thanks!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-74982540979809705142013-11-20T10:55:32.740+01:002013-11-20T10:55:32.740+01:00I'm not sure if either of them realize what th...I'm not sure if either of them realize what they're in for. Glad you empathize, Tina. Thanks!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.com