tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post8799029766479238366..comments2024-01-07T21:31:32.449+01:00Comments on Better Lies: Blindkymmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-24311207784066190752012-09-28T13:47:48.009+02:002012-09-28T13:47:48.009+02:00Ooo. I do like this. I like the way you've b...Ooo. I do like this. I like the way you've built us up to be afraid of something and then tell us it's the ex that we should be fearing. I think a lesser piece would've been written the other way around--by showing us the ex-husband first. Nice job.Trifectanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-80554195786006476432012-09-28T13:16:24.825+02:002012-09-28T13:16:24.825+02:00Thank you all for the comments. Nice to hear, and ...Thank you all for the comments. Nice to hear, and to know what works!<br /><br />lumdog2012: if you replace "ex-husband" with "ex-wife", bet you read it differently.kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-9410463310847257392012-09-28T13:03:19.325+02:002012-09-28T13:03:19.325+02:00I love this. The other comments are right on, the...I love this. The other comments are right on, the pace and how the ex is is worst possible of the horrible possibilities. I have to laugh, I'm an ex-husband and I'm not that bad!lumdog2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/04898266027462039531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-1487113617807638952012-09-28T03:09:13.293+02:002012-09-28T03:09:13.293+02:00I agree with the above... that the thought of an e...I agree with the above... that the thought of an ex-husband can wield that much power is truly terrifying!Flippa Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04829544779655351950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6166211486147906625.post-13136920963470045242012-09-28T02:05:16.838+02:002012-09-28T02:05:16.838+02:00Ooo, dark and creepy - I love that the ex-husband ...Ooo, dark and creepy - I love that the ex-husband is the most terrible of the three possibilities. I also love that your pacing lends a sense of speed to it. You can practically feel her running.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com