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Wednesday, December 10, 2014

River Rules

At the end of it all, James and I position ourselves on the bridge. We gauge the rapids. Cabal is barking from his perch on Devil’s Rock. Whoever reaches it first has claim to him. On the count of three, we jump.


14 comments:

  1. Great job Kymm. There is a lot at stake here - fershure!

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  2. I can feel the suspense, the desperation, and the need. This is a great piece. ♥

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    1. Fantastic to hear that. Thank you, Kathy!

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  3. So vivid! I was looking over the edge of that bridge, checking our the water.

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    1. Thank you, Tina! Keep dry, though, those rapids are rough.

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  4. High stakes indeed!

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  5. Vivid, immediate images and action. Very clear story, here.
    Found you on Yeah, Writes. Looking forward to more!

    Best to you,

    Sally

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    1. Thank you for those kind words, and for the visit, Sally!

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  6. You took me there. Yikes! Good one, Kymm!

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    1. Thank you, Susan! So happy for the company : )

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