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Wednesday, January 7, 2015

Sundering

She sits as his last breath rises. His soul, energy, life-force hovers goodbye. No, she says. Rising, it disperses, turning into universe. No, she cries, how will I know you? Out near another galaxy it flinches. Gathers. Returns. Reenters her atmosphere. Ignites.



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  1. Stunner. In just 42 words, you accomplished a lot.

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    1. Oh, great to hear that. Thank you, Candace!

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    1. Music to my ears, Susan, thank you!

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  4. You are such a gifted writer, taking me out into the universe and just amazing me.

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    1. Tina, you have made my day. Thank you!
      Also: To infinity, and beyond!

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  5. Amazing Kymm! I was taken away, love this ....."Reenters her atmosphere...ignites"

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    1. So nice to hear that. Thank you, Glynis!

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  6. Where's the love button?! Such a great story in just 42 words. Well done!

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    1. I had to read that three times, Arden, how sad is that. I want a love button!!!
      Thank you so much for your kind words : )

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    1. Great to hear, Renada, thank you!

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  8. This was so beautiful, and as others have said, there is so much here! I love that last image.

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  9. Ooo, a sci-fi love story. Or maybe heaven is light years away? Or maybe this is the moment the narrator becomes a soothsayer. So many possibilities. When I get home, I want to try to draw pictures of souls hovering goodbye. What does that look like?

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    1. Hehe Please link me to your pictures, Nate!

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  10. I love this, Kymm, and where it takes my imagination. "...turning into universe" = super

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    1. It's such a pleasure to hear that. Thanks for the love, Jennifer!

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