Consciousness hits as you’re fighting suffocation. Face down in a basement room of Dante’s Inferno, you’re flattened against a sea of bodies caught trying to roll over. You feel your lips press against the hollow below Yannick’s left ear. His good side.

Wow. You took me there! I like this a lot.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Susan! I'm glad to hear it : )
DeleteRight from the title to the last three words....excellent.
ReplyDeleteHey, I appreciate that. Thank you, CC!
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