For Pep, in memorium
How foolish
to trust the moon,
– la luna,
luna, luna –
which gypsies
know for a liar
and a thief
of small boys.
How fully I
trusted the moon
– la luna,
luna, luna –
to hold you
in my gaze
and reflect
you in my eyes.
Full moon
over water dances
as in a
foundry shimmering
with love, her
light gathering
you and me
our
separate yearnings.
Serene moon,
discreet
guardian of all
that was
tender and new.
Delicate
us.
And, oh,
how she,
tremendous,
lily white,
rose
over the placid
harbor.
In her
magnificence the moon
– la luna,
luna, luna –
called me
to you and –
I imagined,
implored, ordained –
called you
to me.
‘Shoo, moon,
moon, moon’
I should
have said,
but I was
not jealous and did not fear
treachery. She
was
our
depository, our safeguard.
Untrustworthy
moon.
– la luna,
luna, luna –
She could
have held you,
kept you,
let me gaze upon you still.
Lily white
she rises.
– la luna,
luna, luna –
temptress
of little boys,
spinning
tales like silver rings.
I gaze in
vain, despairing
and
yearning, unsay your name.
This week's community-judged word is LIGHT
(noun) 3: a source of light: as: a: a celestial body; b: candle; c: an electric light
the moon serves as never ending inspiration, doesn't it? For some reason the sun doesn't have that same allure...
ReplyDeleteI suppose because it is hard to gaze at the sun... Thanks for reading, Sandra!
DeleteGood point.
DeleteI really want to sing this ... a real tragedy... and the last line is a killer-line...
ReplyDeleteHa! I'd love to hear you sing it, Björn. Thank you so much!
Deletethat was beautiful! truly my favorite piece of the week, and probably one of my favorites of yours.
ReplyDeleteTiny black heart, Renada! Thank you. I'm so glad you like it.
DeleteSo gorgeous! Rich language, wonderful pacing, tragic ending. This is absolutely stunning. Especially love "discreet guardian of all that was tender and new. Delicate us." Just wow.
ReplyDeleteAhhhh That means so much, Suzanne. Thank you! So pleased you like it.
DeleteKymm, this was magnificent! Spinning tales like silver rings...I hope there's a full moon tonight, because I want to read this by its light. (And if not tonight, then then when it is again)
ReplyDeleteGorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous!!!
Found this in the spam filter, and so glad I did. You say such lovely things! Thanks again, Valerie!
DeleteThis piece of writing is lovely, lyrical and tragically haunting. I deem it to be the winner of the week. You must be wonderfully satisfied to have created such great work. Congratulations and well done, Kymm!
ReplyDeleteI did enjoy writing it, and am glad you enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for such a glowing review, Tom!
DeleteBeautiful words! Some of it almost has a sing-song quality to it, like something a maiden would speak to the moon in the middle of the woods haha :D
ReplyDeleteI love the image you offer, and only wish I fit it. lol Thank you so much, Draug!
DeleteSome nice imagery and phrases here. Good work with the prompt!
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I thank you kindly, Trifecta.
DeleteLove your use of 'ordained.' Excellent entry.
ReplyDeleteOh, I love ordaining, though I am apparently not very good at it. : )
DeleteThank you, Kylie!
I like how the moon is called "thief of small boys", and "temptress of little boys". That reminded me of how before the Web started getting its legs, back in 1994 when we still had VHS and cassette tapes and polaroid cameras, back when I was in high school my online name was "Lunacy". I enjoyed your poem!
ReplyDeleteGreat online name. Thank you so much for your comments, Rob! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteNicely written!
ReplyDeleteThank you very much, Joe!
DeleteI love this too Kymm! And while I thought I left a comment yesterday-I may have only dreamed that I did, or maybe the moon stole it! In any case, this is a gorgeous piece!
ReplyDeleteI got an email advice of a comment from you, but it never showed up here. The moon just cannot be trusted one bit!
DeleteThanks so much, Valerie. I'm happy you liked it!
The imagery was incredible . Great job. I wish I was this smart.
ReplyDeleteSmart... Didn't you read the title? lol
DeleteThank you so much for your kind comments, Ann!
Makes me happy to hear that, Jo-Anne. I was reading Romancero gitano the whole time, hoping to imbue my piece with a tiny bit of García Lorca.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Wonderful imagery for la luna, and that last line was divine.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Kristin! *divine* swoon.
DeleteI loved this. It's definitely a song! la luna luna luna shoo moon moon moon -- oh I loved these and the very last "unsay your name" I think I think this is lovely lovely lovely!!
ReplyDeleteSo glad for the love, Linda. Thankyou thankyou thankyou!!!
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