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Wednesday, September 17, 2014

The Way of A Man

From the edge of their bed, she watches him sob.
He shakes off her cradling palm, curls into a tight, convulsive ball.
Not just a bad hangover, she realizes.
Appalled, she hiccups her words.
You can’t.
I won’t.
She doesn’t love you.


12 comments:

  1. I hope she gives him the boot. He'll likely keep doing it (or do it again).

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    1. She does, eventually : ) Thanks for the visit, Stacie!

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  2. Does he even realise that? As Stacie said, I hope she leaves him. Not worth the pain!

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    1. Of course you're right, Shailaja, but love is so blind to reason! Thanks for your comments!

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  3. Oh! there is a full story wrapped in 42 words. Master stroke, Kymm. Love your response.

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    1. Thank you so much for the love, TIZ! I´m glad it spoke to you : ) (Master stroke, I'll squirrel that away for a rainy day : )

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  4. Such intensity in such a compact format. Amazing!

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    1. Ohhhhh, that feels great to hear, Tina, thank you!!

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  5. This is quite the story! So big in so few words!!!

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    1. Gina!!! It's so nice to see you here, and saying such lovely things... Thank you!

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  6. This a beautiful story. I can see the scene and feel the emotion. I can already see that I need to spend some time over here. You have mad talent, girlie!

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    1. So glad it was real to you and, wow, thanks so much for saying such nice things. Very pleased to meet you, Michelle!

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