Their second home was a large, crude affair with an
unkempt, overgrown garden. Convinced all it needed was a fresh coat of paint
and tasteful decor, she immersed herself in the study of feng shui. He took the
brand-new chainsaw to the chestnut trees first, then to the tangle of bushes,
where he unearthed a new objet d’art almost daily. He lined them up along the walkway
- Grumpy next to Mother Goose following a small Venus de Milo. When he was down
to shrubs and perennials, she joined him with the rose shears, so they were
together, working side by side, when the Spanish tiling was uncovered near the hidden
street entrance.
“Mumps,” he said at first, then laughing, cried: “The
Mumpses!”
She smiled quickly and cut back more of the ivy, scraping
moss from the cement.
“Mumpsimus,” she said. “Must be Latin.”
“Latin, Shmatin,” he said. “They would have given this
a pompous-sounding name to bring in the rich patrons. It must have been some
sort of treatment or recovery center back in the day, probably very cutting
edge. ‘Little Switzerland’ I bet they called it downtown.”
“More like ‘Mumps ‘R Us,” she said. He didn’t laugh.
He had left the conversation already and was hacking away at a dogwood.
She turned back to look at the house, expecting to see
a faded wooden sign swinging over the front door.
“This house doesn’t have a porch,” she said.
“It doesn’t?” Her husband turned to look with her. “I
could have sworn it did when we bought it.” He picked up the chainsaw and
examined the blade. “Brand new,” he said, “and the teeth are wearing down
already!”
Also, props to Word A Day for mumpsimus.
Funny :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kylie!
DeleteUh-oh, he's a little too eager on the clean up, I think. This story struck me because we bought a house in March that was a bit overgrown and we've been working on getting things cleared out. We still have a porch, though :)
ReplyDeletePorches are great. I miss mine. lol
DeleteThanks, Janna!
Interesting and funny, especially the examination of the chain saw teeth as a punch line.
ReplyDeleteGlad you were amused. Thanks, Joanne!
DeleteI love the line about how he'd left the conversation already and was hacking away at the dogwood-it explains a lot-and that last line was brilliant!
ReplyDeleteInterestingly, when I was working in the garden of a house we had just bought, I dug up a small statue buried upside down by the front door. I learned it was Saint Joseph, and he'd been put there by the previous owner to help speed up the sale of the house.
Great piece of writing Kymm!!
That is such a riot about Saint Joseph!!! (I used to spend time in Somerville, MA, where tiny front yards often have saints in bathtubs. http://bathtubmarysofsomerville.tumblr.com/ )
DeleteThanks for the love, Valerie!!
The porch was there, but it accidentally got chainsawed. I enjoyed this little slice of life between a man and his wife, with their little quirks and their seemingly parallel lives. Great work!
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it. I find most couples have parallel lives, eventually.
DeleteThanks, Tina!
Great piece.. and the mumpsimus is such a great word.. had it the other day in a word game in twitter. And really the conversation turned mumpsimus afterwards....
ReplyDeleteEvery once in a while certain words just grab you, don't they? Funny coincidence.
DeleteThank you, Björn!
My gosh, Kymm, very clever. The mumpsimus of upward mobility? I love your stories for what they often don't say. They are so well-crafted. I love that he had already left the conversation, and the punch line with the chainsaw. Great writing!
ReplyDeleteIn my experience, men come and go in conversations I don't think they ever believe they were even involved in. lol
DeleteThanks so much for the love, Steph! Really glad you enjoyed it.
Someone needs chainsaw intervention! :) I love a good story. This was a good story.
ReplyDeleteHahaha chainsaw intervention!
DeleteThank you so much for the love, Kristy. Glad you enjoyed it.
Love the interaction between these two! And that last line is fabulous. Great story Kymm!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the love, Suzanne! Glad you liked it.
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Oh boys and their toys :D
ReplyDeletelol Exactly!!!
DeleteThanks, Draug!
I would keep him away from any protected forests, if I was her. This is a fun read! Thank you for linking up. Please don't forget to return for the voting!
ReplyDeleteFortunately I don't think protected forests are within their income bracket. lol
DeleteThanks, Tri! Glad you had fun.
I enjoyed this so much. You take a relatively common experience and turn it into an adventure. I love how you choose your words. Well done.
ReplyDeleteSo nice to have a story enjoyed.
DeleteThank you for the love, lumdog!!!