Every once in a
while she feels herself blooming. As unexpected as a mid-summer’s cloudburst, the
efflorescence always takes her by surprise. Then she remembers. Love was the
sun rising beyond his shoulders.
33 of my own words, for
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Ah, wow, this is beautiful Kymm! Love, love, love that last line. Also, efflorescence is a pretty awesome word.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Suzanne! Soaking up the love!
DeleteAwesome words... what we live for, n'est-ce pas?
I agree with Suzanne. Efflorescence is a great word, as is the whole piece! Wonderful feeling to it!
ReplyDeleteSo glad you liked it. Thanks, Steph!
Delete'efflorescence'... I'm stealing that one...
ReplyDeleteHaha! You can't steal it if I give it to you! : )
DeleteBeautiful 33 words Kymm.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Mike. Glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteLovely work with the prompt.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the lovely and thanks for the work, Draug!
Deletebeautiful. you always use the right words to evoke an image flowering with sensation.
ReplyDeleteWhat a sweet thing to say! Thanks, Renada.
DeleteThis is like that first drink of a super bubbly soda! Loved it Kymm!
ReplyDeleteHaha! Love that comparison, Linda!! Thanks for the love!
Deletelove this, last line realy nails it - great feeling and energy
ReplyDeleteAppreciate the love, Steve. I'm glad you liked it.
DeleteThanks so much for the nice words!
Beautiful piece. I like that this is so full of hope. Well done.
ReplyDeleteSo glad you found it beautiful. Thanks, lumdog!
Deletenothing I say will measure to the beauty you've already given
ReplyDeleteMy, what a lovely thing to say. Thank you, Jody!
Delete"Love was the sun rising beyond his shoulders."
ReplyDeleteOh Kymm...beautiful writing, and how you've mastered these 33 words is nothing short of brilliant!
You always have such sweet things to say, Valerie. Thanks for enjoying this.
DeleteSo lovely, so much contained in those few words.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you think so. Thank you, Kallan Annie!
Deleteoh, Kymm . . . it feels like a blooming past a loss - then a sudden remembrance of how full life was before the loss. At any rate, this is beautiful.
ReplyDeleteMy goodness, Barbara, are you a psychic or what?! Nailed that right on the head.
DeleteThank you so much for your kind words (and for getting it)!
Swoon. You've got my vote.
ReplyDeleteYou had me at "swoon".
DeleteThanks Tri!!
This is just a stunning 33 words.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it. Thank you so much for those kind words, Debbie, and for the visit!
DeleteGorgeous picture and sentiments
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked them. Thanks Sarah!
DeleteAw! Such a love poem, which is still very needed in this world! I love that last line.
ReplyDeleteHaha Glad to oblige the world, then! Thanks for the love, Kristy!
DeleteEfflorescence-wow! Very beautiful poem.:)
ReplyDeleteGlad you like the word - it's free all day today!
DeleteThanks for your kind words, Ivy!
Gorgeous, Kymm - just beautiful.
ReplyDeleteSo glad you liked it. Thank you for those kind words, Christine!
Deleteefflorescence -- what a beautiful word... will use that sometimes.
ReplyDeleteIt is a beautiful words - and it is yours for the taking!
DeleteKymm, you've captured the essence of Spring fever,when all of a sudden we realize that we've been stricken by Cupids arrow.
ReplyDeleteHaha Sometimes I wished I realized it a bit earlier, though!
DeleteThanks so much for your kind words, Joanne!
ooh really lovely writing
ReplyDeleteSo kind of you to say so! Thank you very much otherthanlovie!
DeleteThank you, Tara!
ReplyDeleteIt's whatever you want it to be, Jo-Anne. Thanks for the lovely!
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