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Sunday, November 17, 2013

Dancing in the Moonlight - (TrifeXXXtra)


When they dance, she sees that her smile makes her pretty, makes her beautiful even. She is watching it in his eyes and in the play of his lips. She admires the lay of her hand across the back of his shoulder, and she presses down to feel where he is warm and taut, stronger than she could have anticipated. She is surprised to find her body knows far more than she does.
Her body knows where he is hard -it knows why he is hard and what he is hard for- and she can’t help but respond. Her muscles are doing things she is embarrassed to do, but there is nothing that can stop her pulling in close to him, letting the music accompany her body as it turns insistent.
He needs no convincing. He’s already there, holding her to him as they move to the blues that carry them both. All that she doesn’t yet understand is knowledge he has long gathered, long perfected, and it is now his to release to her. She receives the play of his fingers along her hips as they rise without her permission when he sways back and forth. He leans in and she can hear him moan. With her lips she hears and brings them close, covers his lips with hers. She takes his moan into her mouth and holds it there long enough to learn his tongue, understand the heat of it, measure the force of it. As it fills her mouth she learns how to kiss. She learns how to run her tongue into his, run it along his teeth and out to his lips and back in again. All the while her hips mimic the movement of her tongue, and he holds her aloft, holds her against him where she moves –unaware of what she’s doing- but then he hears her. She returns the moan to his mouth and so teaches him. Finally, it is he who is taken by surprise.


 333 words for , in honor of National Erotica Day (November 15th).

38 comments:

  1. Tender moments described with warmth

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  2. This haunting reminds me of "An Education"...lovely, just lovely!!

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    1. Didn't catch that one; it looks good.
      Thank you, UBU!

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  3. she presses down to feel where he is warm and taut, stronger than she could have anticipated. She is surprised to find her body knows far more than she does. great line - nice portrayal :-)

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    1. Ooh, I love line love!
      Thanks so much, Steve!

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  4. I found myself completely wrapped up in this moment Kymm. Such softly scorching writing, my friend. Erotic perfection.

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    1. Always happy to wrap you up, girl (and glad the scorching was soft).
      Thank you, Valerie!

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  5. This is smoldering with sexy intensity. Yum! I love this line: holds it there long enough to learn his tongue, understand the heat of it, measure the force of it.

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    1. More line love and a yum! Thanks so much, momo!

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  6. What a great read. Thanks for sharing!

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    1. Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you, Grace!

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  7. Perfect balance of sexual intensity and softness, Kymm. Loved the piece :)

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    1. I'm glad it felt balanced. Thanks so much for the love, TIZ!

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    1. Glad you thought so. Thanks for the love, Anja!

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  9. This is really erotic. I love the twist at the end.

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    1. That's nice to hear. Glad you enjoyed the twist, too.
      Thanks for the love, Kylie!

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  10. I love the backdrop of the music. Great work!

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    1. The music was what drove it for me. Thanks for the love, Draug!

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  11. well-paced! you highlighted the unconsciousness of her reactions without belaboring it... that's called "skill".

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    1. Oh, if there's anything I hate it's belaboring anything. Thank you!

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  12. Oh, yessss! I read this twice because it's just so good, so steamy, and so well written. I loved the second paragraph--how her body responds to his as if she has no control. So hot!

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    1. Hehe That was the idea, the body as "mover and shaker".
      Thanks so much for the love, Ivy!

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  13. What a sensual and lyrical play on words Kymm-I was borne away on the waves:-)The whole piece sang but the line which played on for me was,"She takes his moan into her mouth and holds it there long enough to learn his tongue, understand the heat of it, measure the force of it."-Wow!

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    1. Oooh more line love! Glad you "got into it". Thanks so much, Atreyee!

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  14. Smouldering and intense. This is so, so good, Kymm!

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    1. Oooh smouldering... I like. Glad you liked it, Suzanne! Thank you.

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  15. Kymm, I have nominated you for the Liebster Award (at http://consciouscacophony.wordpress.com/2013/11/22/playing-liebster-by-the-rules/). Your posts always capture my attention and I'm so glad to have found your blog. Thanks, C.C.

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    1. Thank you, C.C.!
      I don't do much with my blog except write on it, but thank you for the Liebster nomination!
      It's nice to hear! I've been enjoying your posts also. Great to be Trifecta-ing with you!

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