Behind closed eyes, anything is possible. Your smile, your body long against mine. When I open them, you’re never the yellow butterfly that poses on my glass of wine the first fine spring day. Even so, I just can’t help but peek.
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Monday, June 2, 2014
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Oh, this is lovely, Kymm! So apt to the prompt, love it!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for the love, TIZ!
DeleteBeautifully crafted, Kymm. You have absolutely nailed the prompt! Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThat is so nice to say. I thank you kindly, Susan!
DeleteExcellent words here, Kymm. My sort of prose i.e. a bit ethereal/floaty but something we can all relate too.
ReplyDeleteSo glad you could relate. Thanks for your words of praise, Paul!
DeleteI like the butterfly image...
ReplyDeleteNice to hear. Thank you, Natalie!
Delete^^Me too. I only ever get fruit flies hovering around my wine glass!
ReplyDeleteHa! Wouldn't that be annoying, if your loved ones turned out to be fruit flies. Thanks, Stacie!
DeleteButterflies and spring wine...such beautiful images. I can't help peeking, either!
ReplyDeleteThat's what they're there for. Thanks, Tina!
DeleteThis is really well done Kymm. I knew it would be but, I had to peek.
ReplyDeleteHehehe You are very kind, Thom, thank you!
DeleteKeep dreaming, keep peeking...I like how this one makes me think!
ReplyDeleteOh, the highest of compliments. Thank you so much, Jennifer!
DeleteThis was gorgeous!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, April!
DeleteYup - also enjoyed the butterfly line.
ReplyDeleteSo glad you enjoyed it. Thank you, Michelle!
DeleteLove the voice behind '...can't help but peek.' Could see the shrug of the shoulders before she opens her eyes. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great thing to say. Thanks for the love, Sarah!
DeleteI have to add one more <3 for the last line. Love it!
ReplyDeleteYay! Thanks for the love, FF!
DeleteThis works on so many levels. Great writing.
ReplyDeleteGlad to hear that. Thank you so much, Meg!
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