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Monday, June 2, 2014

Egress

Behind closed eyes, anything is possible. Your smile, your body long against mine.  When I open them, you’re never the yellow butterfly that poses on my glass of wine the first fine spring day. Even so, I just can’t help but peek.

 Why does the caged bird sing? asks   My answer # 4 :) 




26 comments:

  1. Oh, this is lovely, Kymm! So apt to the prompt, love it!

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    1. Thanks so much for the love, TIZ!

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  2. Beautifully crafted, Kymm. You have absolutely nailed the prompt! Nicely done!

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    1. That is so nice to say. I thank you kindly, Susan!

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  3. Excellent words here, Kymm. My sort of prose i.e. a bit ethereal/floaty but something we can all relate too.

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    1. So glad you could relate. Thanks for your words of praise, Paul!

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    1. Nice to hear. Thank you, Natalie!

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  5. ^^Me too. I only ever get fruit flies hovering around my wine glass!

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    1. Ha! Wouldn't that be annoying, if your loved ones turned out to be fruit flies. Thanks, Stacie!

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  6. Butterflies and spring wine...such beautiful images. I can't help peeking, either!

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    1. That's what they're there for. Thanks, Tina!

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  7. This is really well done Kymm. I knew it would be but, I had to peek.

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    1. Hehehe You are very kind, Thom, thank you!

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  8. Keep dreaming, keep peeking...I like how this one makes me think!

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    1. Oh, the highest of compliments. Thank you so much, Jennifer!

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  9. Yup - also enjoyed the butterfly line.

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    1. So glad you enjoyed it. Thank you, Michelle!

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  10. Love the voice behind '...can't help but peek.' Could see the shrug of the shoulders before she opens her eyes. Beautiful.

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    1. What a great thing to say. Thanks for the love, Sarah!

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  11. I have to add one more <3 for the last line. Love it!

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  12. This works on so many levels. Great writing.

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    1. Glad to hear that. Thank you so much, Meg!

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