Me, a stone’s throw away from dotted i’s, t’s crossed in the sand, tossed in the waves. You, a thrown stone. Each crash of wave, tumble of sand smoothes your jagged edges, while May’s full moon erases our trail across the bay.
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Hey Kymm! Just making sure you knew in order to participate in the crowd fave vote and the writing contest, you need to fill out this form, please. http://yeahwrite.me/yeah-write-november-writing-contest-entry-form/
ReplyDeleteYikes! Thanks for the heads up, Nate!
DeleteBeautiful take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Laura!
DeleteWow. This is so beautiful and...writerly!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Susan! *blushes*
DeleteWell done Kymm. Truly poetic and thought evoking.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Thom! Always nice to feed thoughtful : )
DeleteBellas imagenes aqui, usted tiene una manera con palabras.
ReplyDelete¡Muchísimas gracias, Clara!
DeleteVery poetic and lovely, Kymm - took my breath away. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteThat is such a nice thing to hear from you, Rachna! Thank you! Thanks for the love : )
DeleteWhat a great piece of writing. So beautifully evocative!
ReplyDeleteI'm so happy you like it Tina, thank you!!
DeleteThis is so beautiful and lyrical! I love "May’s full moon erases our trail across the bay."
ReplyDelete(Apologies if this posts twice...something happened to my first try.)
I'm tickled you think so. Thanks for the love, SL!
DeleteVery nice, lovely!
ReplyDeleteOh, thank you, Jen!
DeleteBeautiful. Makes me long for the beach.... :)
ReplyDeleteHope you make it to the beach! Thank you, Kathy!
DeleteI take this as meeting of the mismatched - 'me', the controlled, 'you', the wild, both becoming one, eased by the sea. (But I could be wrong!) Loved the use of stones and throws.
ReplyDeleteYou're never wrong, Sarah Ann. We all write our own stories as we read them.
DeleteThank you for the love!
I'm glad you found it to be different, Renada. Thank you so much!
ReplyDeleteLovely. I am sorry but I could not stop myself from singing your piece to The Sound of Music's song.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Jasbir!
DeleteI'm not a Sound of Music fan. Doe a deer? Sing away : )